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The end of the Wanderiech Death Bringer by Xaldror
The end of the Wanderiech Death Bringer
I have decided to start adding my own signature into my drawings so that nobody can take from me.
Chapter 2: Start of a new day and getting some actual training
I do not own any Naruto or Bleach characters, I won the idea made for this story, but nothing from the Naruto or Bleach franchise.
Somewhere in the village hidden in the leaf, Naruto Uzumaki was sitting in his worn down apartment. He was thinking about his life in Konoha and how everything has been changing lately. He had attempted suicide and failed, learned that he did actually have people who cared for him and not the stuck up Uchiha and he finally got a team that would actually help him instead of sticking every mistake on him and that he had a sensei that would actually train him instead of playing favorites.
‘I wonder what being with this team will be like.’ The blonde Jinchuuriki thought. He hadn’t been able to sleep at all last night in excitement at the prospect of being accepted and actually getting training.
Naruto rose up from from his old, spring bed and walked through the doorway to his small kitchen and living room in his boxers and grabbed a instant ramen cup from the cupboard. He sat down at the table after waiting for his ramen to finish. He could see the get well gifts sitting on his table from Iruka, Neji and Hinata, Lee, Team ten and surprisingly Anko Mitarashi the Second Exam proctor. The snake loving woman had left him a small box of Dango, and the young Jinchuuriki had found out why the woman liked the sweet dumplings; they were food close to on par with ramen, which Naruto has dubbed ‘The Food of the Gods’.
Naruto got up as the microwave went off and began digging into his ramen.


At Konoha Ninja Academy, the students were just getting into the classroom when Iruka started taking roll call and noticed that one of his students was missing. 'Oh no, not again.' Iruka thought. "Have any of you seen Konohamaru?" Iruka asked the class.
The chunnin only received the shaking of heads and “no”’s from Moegi and Udon. Iruka sighed as he started to mark down the student’s name. Konohamaru had been skipping class more and more after his grandfather, the Sandaime, had been killed by Orochimaru in the Chunnin Exam invasion.
Iruka tapped the board getting his students’ attention relatively easy compared to how he usually has to. “Well lets start up at the Battle of Kannabi Bridge that ended the Third…” The scarred chunnin stopped as he turned to a tapping noise at the doorway.
The entire class looked over at what caught their teacher’s attention and saw a tall man of 6 foot and 2 inches. He is a tall, light-skinned Shinobi with high cheekbones, grey eyes and long wavy brown hair, He has thin facial hair around his mouth and on his cheeks. His hair is tied in a long ponytail and has long bangs that frame the left side of his face. He also has a noticeable amount of body hair on his chest, feet, and arms. He was wearing a straw hat and a pink, flowered lady's kimono, which he drapes across his shoulders and over his jounin uniform. He wore a white haori and obi sash are look cheap under the kimono, his pin-wheel hair pins appeared to be very expensive. At his belt were two large katanas and he bore a calm smile on his face.
The class was caught up with how the man looked that it took a few minutes to notice that he was holding one Konohamaru Sarutobi by the back of his shirt, with the boy wrapped up in ropes. “Would you happen to be Iruka?” The man asked the scarred chunnin as he dumped the young Sarutobi down on the floor. “Yes sir, what may I help you with?” Iruka asked standing at attention in curiosity.
The older man chuckled as he motioned to the young boy currently struggling against the ropes. “Well first I thought I’d drop your little runaway off in his class.” He said getting laughs from the class. “Now I need to talk to you about your former student, Naruto Uzumaki.”
Iruka looked concerned for a moment and the Jounin ushered the younger man outside.
“Has something happened to Naruto, is he ok?” Iruka asked in worry. The older man just chuckled as he calmed down the chunnin. “Don’t worry, he’s okay.” The man said, “My name is Shunsui Kyoraku, I am Naruto’s new sensei.”
Iruka looked up in understanding at the now named Shunsui. “I wanted to learn a bit about my new student from someone he is close to.” He said.
Iruka nodded at the man’s statement before sticking his head into the classroom to actually find his class being quiet instead of running around causing chaos. ‘There is so something going on here.’ He thought with narrowed eyes, before he informed them that they could have an early recess until he got back from a meeting.
He turned to Shunsui and nodded before they started walking to the teacher’s lounge.


Naruto was running through the streets, ignoring the glares and whispers from the civilians standing around in the road. He was excited to finally start training that nothing was going to put a dampener on his mood. ‘Not even my annoyance of an old team.’ Naruto thought as he saw Team 7 sitting at their usual spot on the bridge, they already had a new teammate. The boy was incredibly pale, has short, black hair, and black eyes which contrast with his very pale skin. He was carrying a small backpack with a brush, scrolls, and ninja ink on his lap as he drew while waiting for Kakashi to appear. He’s wearing a short black jacket with red straps, He also carries a short tantō on his back. The rest of his outfit consisted of a high-collared midriff shirt, black pants, shinobi sandals and gloves with his index and thumb fingers exposed.
Naruto glared at the team before returning his attention to the road in front of him while he ran towards the training grounds to meet his new team.
His smile widened as he saw his two female teammates standing in the middle of the Training ground; he blushed as he saw the smiling Yoruichi laughing at a joke from Kukaku, while said green eyed girl was showing how her Kekkei Genkai worked by throwing small energy balls from her hands at various objects in the field and causing the objects they hit to explode.
The two girls jumped startled at their new teammate’s loud voice, causing one of the orbs to fly and hit a large tree destroying it. They turned around to see Naruto running towards them and Yoruichi gave a bright smile waving as Kukaku stared at the boy’s bright orange jumpsuit. “How the hell did I not see that orange monstrosity coming towards us?” She asked herself.
Yoruichi smirked as she punched her friend’s arm as Naruto got closer. “How did you do that? Can you teach it to me!?” Naruto asked excitedly while Kukaku tried to stop the hyperactive boy from talking.
The team was rewarded with a chuckle as they turned and saw Shunsui walking towards them with his arms inside the adjacent sleeves. “Well I see someone is recovering well,” He said as he stroked his beard. “Sorry I’m late! I got held up in a meeting.”
Naruto nodded at the man, a little disappointed at the man’s tardiness even though he himself was twenty minutes late. ‘I hope he doesn’t end up like Kakashi-Teme.’ The blonde thought.
“So…” Shunsui said getting his students’ attention once again. “I’m going to be asking each one of you to go over your independant skills and jutsus, so that I can know what I am working with.” Yoruichi nodded and stepped forward instantly captivating Naruto’s gaze. “I am a between middle chunnin and low jounin level for the Shihoin Taijutsu style that we call Cicada, I am low jounin in Ninjutsu, and can use three Lightning jutsu and seven Wind Jutsu.” She said and unrolled a scroll, unsealing dual katana blades. “I am currently learning dual blade Kenjutsu from an ANBU codenamed Cat, that is a friend of my father.” Shunsui nodded while she put away her swords. “Also, my blood-line Yin-Yang Release allows me to transform into an animal.”
Shunsui rubbed his chin thoughtfully as he nodded. “I can definitely help you with your sword style, I created the Two Heaven’s Kenjutsu style since I am dual handed.” That got astonished looks from the two girls and one confused one from Naruto. “What?” Naruto asked, confusion etched on his face.
Kukaku looked at her new teammate exasperated. “The Two Heaven’s Kenjutsu style is a style that was created by the making full use of the user’s two swords of equal length to fight.” She said as Naruto got an awed look on his face. “It is also mentioned to be the best Kenjutsu sword art in the past couple of centuries.” Shunsui chuckled at that as Kukaku turned her green gaze to the man. “I can’t believe I didn’t recognise Shunsui-sensei earlier, he is the most famous and celebrated Swordsman in the Elemental Nations.”
By now Naruto and his teammates had completely awed looks on their faces. “Now, now.” Shunsui said while he waved his hands. “I may be famous, but I just want a teacher student relationship here.” His students backed off as he chuckled slightly.
Shunsui looked over at Kukaku. “Yes I did create the Two Heavens with the help of my sensei, Jiraiya and teammates when I was a genin and chunnin, nobody knew about it until I had to use it against the Land of Stone Daimyo’s samurai that were aiding Iwa in the Third War.” That got everyone’s attention, especially the ANBU Cat who was in the tree opposite of the clearing watching how their first team meeting went.
“I was one of the people who ended the war along with Minato Namikaze, the Yellow Flash and the Three Sannin.” He held up a hand to make sure they didn’t ask any questions and pointed to Kukaku. “Alright, you’re up.”
“Alrighty then,” Kukaku started as she put her hands on her hips. “I am mid chunin level with taijutsu and I am mid jounin with Ninjutsu, I can use ten Fire style jutsu that I learned from my uncle and one wind style.” She pulled out a small bomb from her pouch, “I use these in correspondence with my Kekkei Genkai, Explode Release, that you guys saw earlier, for when I am low on chakra.” SHe put it back inside before looking back at the group. “I am also high chunin level with genjutsu and Fuinjutsu.”
Shunsui nodded before noticing the wakizashi strapped to the back of her waist. “Are learning Kenjutsu as well?” Kukaku looked back at the blade and shook her head. “No, I learned a bit from my Uncle when he was in ANBU, it is just so I have some kind of defence for close range fighters if they get up close.”
Their sensei nodded and looked at Naruto for him to go ahead and begin. Naruto began sweating as he thought up what he was going to tell them. “Um… I can perform the Kage Bunshin technique and the two of the Academy jutsu,” He began getting a raised eyebrow from Kukaku and Yoruichi. “I don’t know much of taijutsu except what I saw bushy brows do.” Shunsui chuckled at that before shivering at a certain memory of two green beasts creating that unspeakable horror of a genjutsu that even the Sandaime and Kurenai could not dispel. “Oh and I have a summoning contract with the toads and Ero-sennin taught me the Rasengan.”
They waited for more, only to raise their eyebrows when it was apparent that he was done. ‘Damn it Kakashi!’ Shunsui thought, ‘I know Minato taught you better than that.’

A certain silver haired Jounin felt a shiver run down his spine for the third time that week and looked around wondering what was going on.

Shunsui shook his head, there was going to be a lot of work for him to do to undo the damage Kakashi and the idiotic Academy teachers had done to the blonde’s training. He jumped slightly when he heard a whoop of excitement and looked over to see Yoruichi badgering the blonde that he was musing about, about what the Rasengan was like.
Kukaku and Shunsui watched in stunned silence as the training handicapped boy formed the famous A-Rank jutsu in the palm of his hand to show the dark skinned girl.
Shunsui whistled at the sight as he adjusted his hat, he had only seen Jiraiya and Minato perform that technique and he knew that the two of them had taken months at the most to create and master it. To see a young thirteen year old boy with barely any training at all holding the ball in his hand just surprised the man. ‘Kakashi so doesn’t know that he’s missing out on a potential genius,’
Shunsui stroked his chin while his new students sat and talked about their techniques, before he snapped his fingers. “I got it!” His exclamation caught the attention of Naruto and the two girls and they gathered around the Jounin to hear what he got.
The man formed a familiar sign that had Naruto’s eyes widening. “Kage Bunshin No Jutsu!” Three more versions of Shunsui appeared next to him. “Ok Naruto, I want you to stay here with me while Yoruichi and Kukaku go off with these two guys here.” He said patting two clones on the shoulders before they walked away from them with Yoruichi and Kukaku trailing behind them. “And I want you to show me how many Kage Bunshin you can make.” Naruto put his fingers together into his signature technique yelling, “KAGE BUNSHIN NO JUTSU!!” Suddenly the field was filled with three hundred Narutos.
Shunsui’s eyes widened at the amount and whistled. “Damn,” He looked at the original and pointed to his last clone. “I want 150 to go with my clone to work on a jutsu that I want you to learn and have the rest work on Tree Climbing, while I help you with your Taijutsu.” He said getting a confused look from Naruto.
“Why do you want me to send the clones with him, wouldn’t I learn better if you just taught it to me and how will having my clones working on Tree climbing help me?” The jinchuuriki asked. Shunsui looked at him confused, “Don’t you know what Kage Bunsin does?”
Naruto just gave him another confused look.
The Jounin sighed and created another clone. ‘Kakashi, I am so going to kill you once I’m done.’ “Ok, I want you to make another clone and send him with mine into the forest to where we can’t see them.” Naruto did as he was told with a confused look.
The clone Naruto and his sensei’s clone walked deep into the forest while Shunsui and his new student stood there waiting in the field.


Deep in the woods surrounding Training Ground 13, the clones of Shunsui and Naruto stopped as Shunsui placed his hand on the boy’s shoulder. “This is far enough.” Both of the clones stopped and stood across from each other.
“Ok, let’s play rock, paper, scissors.” Shunsui said excitedly while Naruto’s clone looked confused at his sensei’s antics. “Best two out of three wins.” They both held up their hands and shook them three times before Shunsui yelled, “Shoot!”
Naruto won by using scissors, while the Jounin used paper. They did it two mores times with Naruto winning each time. “Ok, let’s dispel and return.” Shunsui said to his student’s clone as it jumped around in victory. The clone nodded and both of the Shinobi went up in a cloud of smoke.


Naruto was waiting with Shunsui, staring at the trees where his and his teacher’s clones had disappeared a short while ago. Suddenly his eyes lit up as he remembered all the things that his clone had done with Shunsui’s double.
Shunsui saw the look in his student’s eyes and chuckled, “So what did we do?” He asked the happy blonde. “We played Rock, Paper, Scissors and I won!!” Naruto yelled out happily.
“See, now you know,” The jounin said. “Everything your clones learn, you learn too.” Naruto looked at him with another awed look and Shunsui smiled at the eager boy. “Well then, lets get training!”
The clones went with their designated teachers while Naruto stayed with Shunsui as the man started the boy off with pushups.


Shunsui laughed as he took in the sight of his three students lying on the ground breathing heavily from their training. He looked up at the sun to see it going slowely down behind the trees. “Well, I guess I could buy you’ll some dinner to celebrate our first day as a complete team.” He said and was startled by Naruto and Yoruichi jumping up in front of him completely reenergized at the mention of free food.
Kukaku groaned from her spot on the ground before she climbed to her feet to join her two hyperactive teammates. ‘Man, sensei is brutal with his training.’ She thought as she rubbed her sore rear.
The new team started to make their way off of the training ground, while the Cat ANBU vanished from her spot in the trees to give her report to the Hokage. Naruto popped his back while they walked down the street before asking where they were going. Shunsui stroked his chin for a minute before speaking. “I was thinking maybe barbecue,”
Kukaku and Yoruichi found their mouths watering at the prospect of meat, while Shunsui thought of all the sake he could get. Naruto continued along behind them silently hoping that the restaurant didn’t kick him out.
After a while they came into view of a large restaurant that had an open terrace with several BBQ grills. Naruto could feel his mouth watering at the scent of the meat cooking and his stomach growled in unison with his teammates getting various blushes. They walked into the front and waited for a host to come and lead them to their table.
After a short wait, a young man in a chinese qao shirt with slicked back black hair greeted team 13. “Hello how may I help yo…” He begins before he lays eyes on the blonde of the group. “I am sorry but, we do not serve his kind here.” He snarled, glaring at the jinchuuriki.
The young man was snapped out of his glaring as Shunsui grabbed the front of his shirt and stared the boy in the eyes. “If we do not get service, then I would like to see your manager,” The Jounin said darkly getting quick and frantic nods from the Host. After another short wait an overweight pudgy man came into view, he was wearing a traditional chef’s uniform and had rings covering all of his fingers and wrists.
“What seems to be the problem?” The man asked with what seemed to be a permanent sneer covering his face. “I would like for my team and I to be allowed in, but your staff seems to be rude and unyielding.” Shunsui answered, the manager looked behind the kimono wearing Jounin to see Kukaku standing next to Yoruichi who was trying to soothe an upset Naruto, who in turn was trying to convince his teammate that it would be ok if they went without him. The Manager gave a small scowl at the sight of the young Jinchuuriki. “Well I am sure I can fit you and these young ladies in with no problem.” He said while grabbing three menus from the podium.
Shunsui frowned at the pudgy man before turning to leave. “I said entire team,” The man said. “If you can’t even do that, I’m sure we can find something somewhere else, but I will be complaining this bad behavior to Lady Hokage.” His three students nodded while Yoruichi got Naruto up from the ground to walk out. “Come on, Naruto-Kun, let’s go somewhere else.”
The manager’s eyes widened as the team walked out, before he started going after them. “Wait… Wait!” He yelled. “I’ll let you in!” Shunsui smiled and turned around to the man, he put a soothing hand on Naruto’s shoulder. “Come on, Naruto-Kun, Lets go eat.” He got a smile from the blonde in turn. “Yes, Shunsui-Sensei.”
The pudgy man set them at a table close to the outside wall away from most costumers and left them with their menus. The team talked for a little bit before digging into the meat that was placed on the grills in front of them. Yoruichi would compare how living in the Shihoin clan house with Kukaku’s clan home, before they all talked about what they wanted to do in the coming days. Shunsui even took out a pen and pad and wrote down parts of their training that they wanted to work on. For Yoruichi, it was Kenjutsu, Kukaku, her genjutsu and her blood-line and Naruto wanted to learn more jutsu.
After an hour or so, they left, Shunsui being kind enough to leave a tab. As they left the shop, Shunsui turned to his blonde student. “Hey, Naruto-Kun,” He called getting everyone’s attention. “How would you like to get a new set of clothes, that orange jumpsuit is just yelling ‘Kill me!’” Naruto looked down at the ground and scuffed his foot against a rock. “It’s the only thing I can afford though.”
Yoruichi and Kukaku raised their eyebrows at the mention. ‘Whenever I go shopping I don’t have to spend too much, most of the stuff I buy should cost way more than that horrid jumpsuit.’ Yoruichi thought. She liked the color orange, just not in that much quantity.
Shunsui chuckled before placing his hand on the boy’s shoulder before looking at his two female students. “Ok, you two are dismissed, I am going to take Naruto shopping to get some new clothes that would actually work for a ninja.” The two girls nodded before walking away chattering. Shunsui smiled down at the confused blonde. “Well, let us be going then!” He said as he began steering Naruto in the direction of the shopping districts.
Shunsui Kyoraku of Team 13 by Xaldror
Shunsui Kyoraku of Team 13
===== INFO ======
Shunsui Kyōraku is the Sensei of Team 13 and Jounin Commander of the Shinobi forces of Konohagakure. His genin are Naruto Uzumaki, Yoruichi Shihoin and Kukaku Shiba. He is the former teammate of the Yellow Flash of Konoha, Minato Namikaze.
===== Appearance ======

Shunsui Kyōraku is a tall, light-skinned man with high cheekbones, grey eyes and long wavy brown hair. His hair is tied in a long ponytail and has long bangs that frame the left side of his face. He also has a noticeable amount of body hair on his chest, feet, and arms. He wears a straw hat and a pink, flowered lady's kimono, which he drapes across his shoulders and over his Jounin uniform. Although his haori and obi sash are cheap, his pin-wheel hairpins are very expensive. He does not wear tabi with his traditional samurai sandals. He has thin facial hair around his mouth and on his cheeks. 

===== Personality ======

Shunsui is a laid-back and flamboyant man, evident in his style of dress and general attitude, and is rarely seen without a smile. In his off time, he often drinks sake in bars and naps. He likes steamed buns that go with sake, but dislikes powdered green tea, especially after Naruto and Yoruichi swapped his sake with it. Other times, he likes to chase after women; particularly his strict girlfriend, Nanao Kuchiki, whom he calls "my Nanao-chan" and her older sister, Lisa Kuchiki. Shunsui tends to use a more casual speech style than many other Jounin and chunnin. He generally refers to his fellow Jounin and ninja by their first name followed by an honorific. Shunsui wrote a romance novel titled "Rose-colored Path" while helping his sensei Jiraiya peep, which runs in Konoha Market, but is very unpopular. Shunsui does not receive a single fan letter or gift for his birthday from his readers, but he is not bothered by this at all.

Kyōraku is a peace-loving man who will always try to talk his way out of battles, though he doesn't wish to insult opponents by refusing to fight. The slightly eccentric Kyōraku also seems to like making an impression on opponents. Though Kyōraku tries to talk his way out of a fight, he will fight when the situation demands it; as seen in his battle with the missing nin, Ikari Tenro. When the Zanderiech member, Hiroshi Uzumaki, asked that they only pretend to fight, he declines the offer, though notes that he prefers to do the same. He maintains a level of honor and integrity when engaging in battle. He refuses to fight with children or even in the presence of a child. He always maintains a veil of respect for his opponent, is polite in combat situations and prefers to fight one on one. When fighting powerful opponents, like Pein or Madara, he rarely loses his cool, going as far as to make small talk and joke around with his opponents.

Alias: Shunsui of the Two Heavens

Name: Shunsui Kyoraku

Age: 48 to 55

Height: 6.2

Weight: 189 lbs

Hair: Brown

Eyes: Grey.

Blood Type: A+

Birthday: January 12th

Favorite Color: Any

Favorite Food: Sake, sweet buns, dango

Likes: Meeting new people, making friends and playing pranks with his friends. People: Nanao: His girlfriend and a Chunnin. Jiraiya: His Sensei and one of the legendary sannin. His students: His genin team. 

Armament: Dual chakra metal swords, shuriken, kunai, explosives and scrolls.

Chakra Element: Earth, Wind and Fire Release

Summons: Heron

Bloodline: None

Genin graduation age: 10

Chunnin promotion age: 12

Jounin promotion age: 15

Bingo Book Ranking: SS-Rank

Shunsui's skill level:

Taijutsu: Kage

Genjutsu: High Chunnin

Ninjutsu: ANBU Commander with mastered affinity for earth, fire and wind affinity

Stealth and Infiltration: Anbu Captain

Chakra: Rivals the seven tailed beast, still refuses to become Hokage.

Control: Elite Jounin

Speed: Kage

Kenjutsu: Kage

Weapons and Accuracy: Anbu Commander

Fuinjutsu: Mid Jounin

Strength, Stamina, Resistance, flexibility: Kage

Healing: Slight ability with medical jutsu.

===== PLOT AND INFO ======


  • The Village of Konoha / Village Hidden in the Leaf

Konoha is a hidden shinobi village located in the vast forests of Fire Country. It is a secret village that many know about due to it being among the five great ninja villages. It is not located on a map due to it being a shinobi village. The Village itself is covered in a barrier to ward away unwanted visitors.



Shunsui Kyoraku was born to a young kunoichi after she was raped before the beginning the Third Shinobi war. He was raised by Jiraiya of the Sannin, after the man found Shunsui roaming the streets at the age of three when his mother died.

In Shunsui's case he is naturally gifted with Taijutsu, ninjutsu and kenjutsu, he was placed on a genin team with Minato Namikaze, Konoha's Yellow Flash and Mikoto Uchiha under his foster father, Jiraiya. He helped save the Princess of the Land of Water after the war had started when the Water Daimyo refused to aid Kumo, Iwa and Kiri in the war against Konoha.

A few years after becoming Jounin with his team, Jiraiya and Shunsui's teammates helped create their individual styles, Shunsui's Two Heavens Kenjutsu style, Minato's Hirashin and Mikoto's Black Crow Interceptor style. He signed the heron contract to complete his style by adding their grace and form to his blade work. Completely setting his Kenjutsu style as the best sword style in the Elemental nations after he destroyed an entire Iwa battalion by himself at the same time his former teammate, Minato, used Hirashin to massacred a battalion.

After the Kyuubi attack, Shunsui traveled around the Elemental nations with a Sannin pass, to take a view on life and purpose. He was called back to Konoha after the Invasion during the Chunnin exams to teach a genin team consisting of the second Shihoin branch heiress, Yoruichi; the Shiba clan heiress, Kukaku and the Kyuubi Jinchuuriki, Naruto Uzumaki after the Uzumaki attempted suicide to escape the prejudiced of Konoha's civilians and genin Team 7.



Shunsui is highly proficient in Wind, earth and fire Elements, he has chakra levels that rival the seven tails and is capable of facing two Kages by himself, an example is when he fought against the reanimated edo tensei 3rd Raikage and 3rd Kazekage. He is a master in Kenjutsu, ninjutsu and taijutsu, Shunsui is a SS-ranked later on. He has high skill in Ninjutsu and elemental jutsus.

This is Shaolin Fon for my Fan-fiction (Return of Uzushiogakure) that is a sort of crossover between Naruto and Bleach; there is no Zanpakuto though.

----Personal Information----

Name: Fon, Shaolin; Short: Soifon

Moniker: The Black Hornet

Age: 13 to 19

Birthday (16, February)

Sex: female

Species: Human

Rank: Genin, Chunin, Anbu, Anbu Captain.

Nationality: Land of Whirlpools

Sexual Preference: Heterosexual


Significant Other: Naruto Uzumaki

Known Family: Suì-Fēng (Grandmother, †), Kang Fon (Father), 3 unnamed brothers (all †)

---Professional Information----

Affiliation: Uzushiogakure

Rank: Genin, Chunin, Member of the Ten Storms, Fon Clan Heir.

Teammates in her Genin Team: Naruto Uzumaki, Renji Terumi and Yoruichi Shihoin.


Height: 150 cm (4'11")

Weight: 38 kg (83 lbs)

Eyes: Grey

Hair: Black

Build/body: (petite, A-cup, lean. Lightly tanned skin)

Distinguishing features:

--The long strands of her hair is worn short with two long braids bound in white cloth, each ending in a large golden ring..

--scar on her right hip from being attacked by S-Class missing Ninja Hoshigaki Kisame


-She wears a traditional Samurai sleeveless haori and a yellow obi tied around her waist. Underneath her Haori, Soifon wears a black uniform with the front of a battle kimono, which has no sleeves and doesn't cover the back, though she does wear long black arm bands. Instead of wearing the standard Shinobi sandals, she wears traditional Chinese shoes with ordinary white socks.


--Despite her cold demeanor and constant attack towards her genin team, she has displayed a certain level of faith in them, like trusting Omaeda and Kentaro to act as a distraction while she and Onihime carry out a plan. Her stubborn attitude is so great that even now she still seems to hold a degree of dislike for Kisuke Urahara, Yoruichi’s lover, be it because Yoruichi used to tease her about him, or she found his lazy demeanor undisciplined or that she still blames him for her mentor's capture by the ROOT anbu of Konoha, when he was originally held a hostage to get her sensei’s bloodline. This is shown when she asks Harrigan Uzumaki to place the shop owner in a sealing barrier for a month in exchange for using her Stormcloak a second time in one day.

-- Soifon is Ranked the Tornado of the Ten Storms of Uzushiogakure, to her subordinates and Genin, she is cold and unwelcoming. But she is usually timid and shy around her Idol, Yoruichi the former Tornado of the Storms, and her boyfriend, Naruto her genin teammate and current holder of the Maelstrom position of the Storms.

-- She seems to be quite obsessed with her sensei, Yoruichi, and her Teammate, Naruto, and often spends her free time dreaming about the days when they fought together and practiced Shunpo. At one point, she even tried to give Naruto a heart-shaped box of chocolates when she went on a date with him for the first time. She seems to love anything that resembles a black cat, which is Yoruichi's alternate form when using her Yin/Yang Bloodline, and she has a large collection of black cat shaped merchandise. At one point, Soifon is given a black cat plushie by Rin Kurotsuchi, who has just returned from a mission to Kumogakure. It is also known that since Yoruichi's reappearance, after being held captive by Danzo’s ROOT, she began to collect cat accessories and had the Ten Storm Barracks, where the Ten Storms of Uzushio live, installed with floor-heating; the expenses were covered by her Genin student, Omaeda Kinuta, who is the Clan Heir of the Kinuta Clan. Soifon once seems to be affectionately admiring pictures of Yoruichi and Naruto. Later, as part of the photo collecting project of the Uzushio Women's Association she attempts to take nude photos of Yoruichi while she is distracted, but fails miserably. She is incredibly shy and timid when on dates with her Teammate and fellow Storm, Naruto Uzumaki, who holds the rank of Maelstrom.

--Soifon is a person of incredible resolve, not hesitating to do whatever it takes to complete a mission and defeat her enemy; an example of this can be seen during her battle with Hoshigaki Kisame, An S-Class missing Nin from Kiri, after being exposed to an attack she orders her current teammate to remove her arm without hesitation. Very rarely will Soifon show signs of desperation or emotion on the battlefield, except when it concerns her former sensei and Naruto.

--Soifon is staunchly loyal, firm, and unbending in her beliefs. She is a hard worker and takes a strong moral stance — she particularly believes in following orders. She is generally reserved and truly not arrogant in any manner like her genin students Omaeda and Kentaro, though she is not above mocking or joking around with her opponents or smirking while in combat, a trait also seen in her predecessor. She will not hesitate in the slightest to strike down even her subordinates if they betray Uzushiogakure. She chooses to ignore all her subordinates, including her genin student Omaeda, believing that personal struggle builds character. Soifon, like most Kunoichi, is a member of the Uzushio Women's Association.

-- Suì-Fēng likes fish, but dislikes meat. She is a large fan of Honey, which shortly led to her signing the Wasp contract and she hates the taste of any type of alcohol, believing it to be the bane of any good man or woman.

Major quirks/habits

- Soifon tends to be picky about her food and what to eat.

- She tends to stutter or blush furiously when caught off guard by her Sensei and/or Naruto.

- She is extremely Loyal to her close friends and the Uzukage.

- Unlike her Sensei, Yoruichi or her boyfriend, Naruto, she doesn’t like to pull pranks; especially getting enraged when they pull one on her. She usually chases either one of the perpetrators around Uzushio until they or she runs out of stamina.

Speech mannerisms

- She has a slight northern accent due to her clan coming from the lands north of Iwa.

- Her favorite saying: "Turn around and only an afterimage remains withal."

- She will at times mumble or stutter when she is embarrassed.


Flash Step Master: As a member of the Ten Storms and a Kunoichi of Uzushio, she is also highly proficient in Flash Step, a style of speed created by her mentor that can rival and even surpass the shunshin; her mentor’s is close to being on parr of the speed of the Yondaime Hokage’s Hirashin. She is able to almost keep up with her mentor Yoruichi Shihōin, being able to hit her multiple times with her claw gloves, but not getting a chance to hit her in the same spot twice, as Yoruichi was faster. She actively uses her mastery of Flash Step techniques, and is highly proficient in evasion in close quarters, as well as from a distance, thus making hitting her almost impossible for all but the most advanced combatant. Her movements are so fast that few would be likely to see an attack by her take place. It has also been noted by Mei the Uzukage that her Flash Step is the fastest of all Uzushiogakure (excluding Yoruichi and closely followed by Naruto).

  • Speed Clones: Suì-Fēng is able to create at least 15 clones of herself at once using Shunpo. While they are indistinguishable from her true self and mimic her movements, they do not seem to last long.

  • Cicada, referencing their molting: Way of Onmitsu, 3rd of the Shihō. It allows for a movement at great, sudden speed, leaving at least one tangible after-image behind.

Taijutsu Master: As the Tornado of the Ten Storms and Fon Clan Heir, Soifon is required to be highly proficient in hand-to-hand combat, which she had been training in ever since she first joined the Uzushiogakure Shinobi ranks. She is likely the most proficient hand-to-hand combatant in all of Uzushiogakure, being able to fight evenly with, and gain the upper hand against, her mentor Yoruichi Shihōin. She is also proficient in counterattacking. Her attacks have great speed and agility, leaving little time to counterattack. Additionally, it has proven difficult to actively lay a hand on her unless she allows it. She also implements the effect of her dual claw gloves in her taijutsu style, to inflict lasting wounds on her opponent.

  • Taijutsu: Windmill: A Taijutsu technique where one throws their body up into the air and makes a shearing movement with the legs to get one leg in front of the other without holding on to the ground. The move can either be done backwards or sideways. When the move is done, with one leg high over the head, the user delivers a devastating kick to the opponent, sending them flying away with tremendous force.

  • Taijutsu: Waterfall Carp: A Taijutsu technique where one blocks the kicks of an opponent by trapping the opponent's one foot against the forearm and blocking the other foot with the combatant's foot. The move blocks and traps the opponent, who is then open to an attack from the combatant's free hand.

Flash War Cry: An advanced technique that combines Taijutsu and Ninjutsu. She fights by surrounding her back and arms with pressurized Chakra. The keisen uniform has no back or sleeves because they will rip apart when the technique is activated. The technique takes the form of wind currents and its incomplete form is concentrated around her right arm. She has enough control to release the Chakra energy as a directed blast that can cause considerable damage to the surrounding area. She can use the technique to a greater degree later on, using it to block a devastating lightning blast and dissipate it, and block a blade attack as well as push it back with only her bare hand, using the energy of the technique as a barrier. She has shown that she can focus the technique's pressurized Chakra onto specific areas of her body, making the protection exceedingly more concentrated.

  • Infinite Flash War Cry: She would go on to complete the Flash Cry technique shortly after her fight with Yoruichi. Soifon discovered a technique for encircling her body multiple times to make the Chakra she emits revolve around her like a vortex indefinitely, therefore once she activates her Flash Cry she is able to maintain it for as long as she wants.

Kenjutsu Master: Soifon is masterful in swordsmanship, usually only employing her katana when facing an opponent with a drawn weapon. She is unique in that her fighting style is different from traditional styles. Soifon holds the blade horizontally in a reverse grip, using the blade like a large dagger with it pointed backwards towards the bottom of her gripping hand. All strikes are made by sweeping the arm forward, as though throwing a punch, while whipping the blade forward away from the arm quickly in a broad arc. She is quite adept at blocking with the blade in this manner as well. She also fights in the normal style masterfully, making her proficient in two variations of sword fighting.

Ninjutsu Expert: As member of the Fon Clan and the Ten Storms, Soifon is well versed in art of Ninjutsu, though she prefers to use Flash Step and Taijutsu techniques. She is experienced enough to mix it with other hand-to-hand combat techniques.

Master Kunoichi: As the Tornado of the Storms, Soifon is one of the foremost masters in the art of assassination. She is known to be skillful in staying hidden. Using Flash Step, she has disabled opponents without them being able to see her, as she did while catching the arrows of a rogue A-Class shinobi in battle. She also used this ability to sneak up on Danzo and temporarily capture him before he escaped back to Konoha. She has studied all the disciplines of the punishment force since she was a child, including poison. Because of this, over the years she has developed a resistance to nearly every poison there is, with the exception of Sasori of the Red Sand’s own unique brand of poison.

Master Strategist & Tactician: As member of the Ten Storms of Uzushiogakure, Soifon has shown herself to be a capable leader. Soifon has repeatedly proved herself to be insightful and crafty, capable of quickly understanding any situation that presents itself and adjusting to it effectively. Soifon has shown an innate skill to determine what actions should be taken in battle. The tactics she employs are based on subterfuge and confusion. She is adept at lulling her opponents into a false sense of security and allowing them to underestimate her abilities. A common tactic of hers is to gauge the opponent's strengths and weaknesses in the middle of combat.

Great Chakra Power: As the Tornado of the Ten Storms, she boasts a great amount of Chakra. Her Chakra is golden-yellow.

  • Masterful Chakra Control: Due to her position within the Uzushiogakure ranks, Soifon is trained in the mastery of hiding her presence and Chakra signature from detection.

Enhanced Strength: Soifon is strong enough to take on bigger opponents despite her smaller stature, easily overcoming those four times her own size. She has shown herself capable of lifting large slabs of concrete that she was buried under with little to no effort. During her fight with Tenken and Gonryōmaru, Soifon sent the latter flying into a wall with a single kick.

Enhanced Durability: Soifon is highly durable, able to withstand being kicked into buildings with enough force to go through walls and bring whole sections down on top of her while sustaining no apparent injuries. She even endured having her left arm cut off when dealing with Itachi’s Amaterasu, and still remained able to engage in combat for an extensive period of time.

Enhanced Flexibility: She is considered by some to be freakishly flexible and Agile. She is capable of nearly bending backwards in half to dodge strikes, sometimes aweing her opponents.


Soifon is slightly arrogant when it comes to fighting other shinobi and kunoichi. Her main weakness is when Naruto makes her favorite food or when she sees anything related to her sensei, like black cats or nude pictures of the woman.


Soifon was born Shaolin Fon into the Fon Clan, one of the lower clans affiliated with the Shihōin clan. She is in the 9th Generation of her family and as the youngest of six siblings she joined the Uzushiogakure Shinobi Ranks as was tradition in her family. Upon joining the militia, she dropped her given name, Shaolin Fon, and inherited the code name that her great-grandmother used, Soifon. Out of her five older siblings, two died on their first mission as genin, then two more became jounin before dieing. The last one died on his sixth C-Rank mission, effectively leaving her as an only child by the time she was eight.

As an Academy student and a Genin, Soifon trained intensely in order to become as strong as the current Tornado of the Ten Storms, Yoruichi Shihōin, the person she had come to adore. As she turned ten, her efforts finally paid off when Yoruichi took notice of her talent and promoted Soifon to become her personal protege. Initially, their differing personalities seemed to clash due to Yoruichi's laid back nature, however, Soifon dedicated her life to her master, happy to put her life on the line for her. In turn, Yoruichi took Soifon under her wing as her protégée, and they developed a close relationship as student and mentor, which only branched out later as Yoruichi took on Naruto Uzumaki, the outcast Kyuubi Jinchuuriki from Konoha, and Renji Terumi, the nephew of Mei Terumi.

She had a short temper when it came to Kisuke Urahara, her sensei’s lover, toward Yoruichi's intention of putting him up for promotion to be the new Firestorm of the Ten Storms because all she saw was his carefree attitude; being lazy and doing bad at his job. Soifon dragged Naruto with her to confront Yoruichi, concerned that she is overestimating Urahara's capabilities. She explained that she believes it was a mistake to even appoint him as an Anbu under her, and goes on to say that he is undeserving of such a position. While Yoruichi, without hesitation, admits to the fact that Urahara is not really a hard worker, she dismisses Soifon’s criticisms and playfully insinuates that her focus on him must have romantic connotations, though Soifon denies it entirely and stalks off; the team and Urahara later find out that she had a crush when it came to her Blonde teammate Naruto, so she took the jab of her liking Urahara as an insult.


"Turn around and only an afterimage remains withal."


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